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제목 Last week 등록일 2023-05-08
내용 On Thursday my casts removed finally. I've been depressed with pain and unconvenience by cast for weeks.
Though I didnt recoverd well but I am good because I stepped forward one step. I tryed to adjust to walking.
On Sunday, I organized my stuff and cleaned my rooom.
I hope to getting better soon as before I was injured.
I had a lunch witht my friend and talking about illness and how to manage the daily life.
I enjoyed sunshine of Spring and ligth green trees.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-05-09
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On Thursday my casts removed finally. I've been depressed with pain and unconvenience by cast for weeks.
Though I didnt recoverd well but I am good because I stepped forward one step. I tryed to adjust to walking.
On Sunday, I organized my stuff and cleaned my rooom.
I hope to getting better soon as before I was injured.
I had a lunch witht my friend and talking about illness and how to manage the daily life.
I enjoyed sunshine of Spring and ligth green trees.

My casts were finally taken off on Thursday. I've spent weeks feeling down because of my discomfort and inconvenience.
Despite my poor recovery, I am still in decent shape since I moved forward. I made an effort to walk again. On Sunday, I organized my stuff and cleaned my room. I'm hoping to recover quickly as I've previously been hurt. My friend and I discussed managing daily life and my sickness over lunch. I enjoyed the sunshine of spring and lush green trees.

 

 

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