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제목 | Buying plants | 등록일 | 2023-05-09 |
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내용 | If I purchase a new plant, I would keep them in my room. I spend most of time in my room in the house, so I can be happly for long time seeing them. If I need to know more about gardening , I would be more likly to ask from a gardening specialist. Because I usually buy some plants at the offline shop,so that time I can ask directly. And It's easier to remember when I ask with people than I search online. Because when I meet people face to face I can recognize not only information itself but also atmosphere, voice. |
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담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2023-05-09 |
첨삭 내용 | If I purchase a new plant, I would keep them in my room. I spend most of time in my room in the house, so I can be happly for long time seeing them.
I would keep a fresh plant in my room if I bought one. I spend the majority of my time in my room at home, so seeing them makes me happy for a very long time. I would most likely consult a gardening expert if I needed more information about gardening. I frequently purchase plants offline so I can ask directly at the store. I can recall things better when I ask others than when I look them up online. Because when I interact with individuals in person, I can distinguish not only the content itself but also the tone and voice. |