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제목 The work 등록일 2023-05-11
내용 I am work for IT comapy. I do quality mangement at the software project.
If work place were close to my home. I would be less tired.
Sometimes I'm very busy at work, so it would be helpful to relieve fatique and fresh everyday.

Plenty of vacation days would be most important to me.
On vacation I want to visit other country and experience other culture, nature and people.
I can have positive energy from them. I will get back to work and daily life with energy.

First, they can learn skills and get know many best practices.
Second, they can keep up the new trends and they can apply them
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-05-12
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I am work for IT comapy. I do quality mangement at the software project.
If work place were close to my home. I would be less tired.
Sometimes I'm very busy at work, so it would be helpful to relieve fatique and fresh everyday.

Plenty of vacation days would be most important to me.
On vacation I want to visit other country and experience other culture, nature and people.
I can have positive energy from them. I will get back to work and daily life with energy.

First, they can learn skills and get know many best practices.
Second, they can keep up the new trends and they can apply them

 

I work for an IT firm. I do quality management on software projects.If my workplace were close to my home, I would be less tired.
Sometimes I'm very busy at work, so it would be helpful to relieve fatigue and feel fresh every day. Plenty of vacation days would be most important to me.I want to travel and discover different cultures, landscapes, and people while on vacation. They can first pick up knowledge and develop their talents.Second, they can stay current with fashions and use them.

 

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