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제목 national sports teams 등록일 2023-05-19
내용 I think that national sports teams should be funded by the government
Here are some reasons. First, they don't worry about financial problem, so they can concentrare on sports.
They can do their best to develop their ability.
Second, though some kind of sports is not popular they can inform that sports, and people interested in that. Players getting much more and that sports will be developed.
Third, if they are supported by private companies, it can be limiting. companies focus on popular sports and want to make profits commercially. so diversity of national sports and players is reduced.
담당강사 AliciaM1usa 등록일 2023-05-22
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I think that national sports teams should be funded by the government
Here are some reasons. Firstly, they don't have to be worried about their finances, so they concentrare more on developing their sporting talent and skills.
Secondly, though some kind of sports are  not popular they can promote those sporting activities , and people an become interested . 
Thirdly, If teams are supported by private companies, it can be limiting.Companies will focus on popular sports alone  and would  want to make profits commercially so diversity of national sports and players is reduced.

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