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제목 At the warehouse 등록일 2023-05-22
내용 This picture was taken at the warehouse. There are a woman and a man. They are standing at a table and holding a cup in their hands. They are smiling each other.
On the left a woman is wearing a pink gardigan and on the right a man is wearing a checkerd shirt
I can see a shelf filled with boxes in the background

This picture was taken at the clothes and jwerly store.
A woman is standing in front of the mirror.
She is looking at the mirror how the jwerly looks around her neck.
On the left some jwerly and on th right some clothes are displayed
담당강사 AliciaM1usa 등록일 2023-05-23
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This picture was taken at the warehouse. There is a woman and a man. They are standing at a table and holding a cup in their hands. They are smiling each other.
On the left  the woman is wearing a pink gardigan and on the right the man is wearing a checkered shirt
I can see a shelf filled with boxes in the background

This picture was taken at the clothes and jewerly store.
A woman is standing in front of the mirror.
She is looking into the mirror to see how the jewellrey looks around her neck.
On the left there is some jewellery and on the right there are some clothes on display.

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