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제목 The party 등록일 2023-05-23
내용 If I attend a party I bring a gift for the host, because I would like to show aprreciation for inviting us.

If I were hosting a party I would be more likely to have food delivered form a restaurant.
Because cooking takes much efforts and time. I want to enjoying the party without concerning food. Moreover I am not good at cook, so guests might not like it. But actually I would like to add one cooked by myself showing sincerity.
담당강사 AliciaM1usa 등록일 2023-05-24
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If I attend a party I always bring a gift for the host, because I  like to show aprreciation for the invitation.

If I were hosting a party I would be more likely to have food delivered from a restaurant.
This is because cooking takes much effort and time. I want to enjoy the party without   being concerned about  food. Moreover I am not a good cook, so guests might not like my cooking. However I am likely  to add one home cooked option  to show sincerity and effort.

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