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제목 Being patient 등록일 2023-05-23
내용 Being patient is the most important quality for emplyoees to possess.
These are some reasons.
Firstly, under the unpredictable circumstances they might do right decision and solve the problem.
Secondly, they gives good impression to people at the meeting. so they can have good relationships with others
This is important because we work with many other people
Thirdly, they can prepare the future. Chances go to those who are prepared
담당강사 AliciaM1usa 등록일 2023-05-24
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Being patient is the most important quality for emplyoees to possess.
These are some reasons.
Firstly, under the unpredictable circumstances they might need to make decisions and solve the problem.
Secondly, they need to give a  good impression to people at  meetings so as to create good relationships.
This is important because we work with many  people
Thirdly, they can prepare for  the future. Chances go to those who are prepared

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