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제목 Lesson 7 Review (05.24) 등록일 2023-05-24
내용 Dear Cavin :)
Good evening.
I need to improve my English skills, So We will review about class from today.

1. My answer may be more shorter that yours answer.
2. It is time sensitive to go to hospital after a traffic accident.
3. I'm relieved when i was prepare for lesson on yesterday, already.
4. Just focus on your work now.

1. Now, please set priorities of holiday plan.
2. I have a many tasks.
3. Please reply for our e-mail, urgently.
4. If you send us the e-mail, please attached the evidence to us. It's important, but not critically urgent.

Bye!
담당강사 Grant2usa 등록일 2023-05-25
첨삭 내용

Dear Kevin
Good evening.
I need to improve my English skills, So We will review about class from today.

1. My answer may be more shorter than your answer.
2. This is time sensitive, there was a traffic accident  and we have to go to the hospital.
3. I am relieved that I was prepared for the lesson yesterday.
4. Please focus on your work now.

1. Now let us plan the priorities for the holiday .
2. There are  many tasks I have to do.
3. Please reply to our e-mail, urgently.
4. If you send us an e-mail, please attach the evidence ,It is important but not urgent.

Bye!

 

Hello I have made the necessary corrections.

 

Kevin

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