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제목 Typoon in Korea 등록일 2023-05-26
내용 In summer, typhoons always come to Korea.
For many years typhoon give so many damages to Korea.
But there is some strange factors about typhoon in Korea.
First, the typhoon hit the specific regions.
Jeju island is first place hit by the typhoon.
And Kyoungsangnam-do is second place.
I had lived in Busan almost 30years.
From June to september, occationally typhoon hit my hometown.
Sometimes I had watched TV all night long to avoid some accident happen like breaking windows.
My family sometime gained damage by typhoon.
My uncle's house hit by flood. He was OK, but he had bad time to recovery.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2023-05-29
첨삭 내용

In summer, typhoons always come to Korea.
For many years typhoons give so much damage to Korea.
But there are some strange factors about the typhoon in Korea.
First, the typhoon hit specific regions.
Jeju Island is the first place hit by the typhoon.
And Kyoungsangnam-do is second place.
I had lived in Busan for almost 30 years.
From June to September, occasionally typhoon hits my hometown.
Sometimes I watched TV all night long to avoid some accidents happening like breaking windows.
My family sometimes gained damage from the typhoon.
My uncle's house was damaged by the flood. He was OK, but he had a bad time to recover.

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