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| 제목 | My favorite | 등록일 | 2023-05-27 |
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| 내용 | I lke to reading books and writing and speaking English. I have new books regarding nature, buddism, histoy, classics, poems but I didn't finish reading all of them. I like to going public bath and having a cold and warmth bath seven times because it is good for my body. I got to know that the cold and warmth bath makes our body's immune system strong. I feel very fresh after having a cold and warmth bath every weekends with my daughter. I like to going abroad and seeing many things and people, so I continue to study English until now I am looking forward to going abroad with my family . |
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| 담당강사 | Ruby | 등록일 | 2023-05-30 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I like reading books, writing, and speaking English. |
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