The library is my favoriate spot for my entertaining myself in my neigborhood. I go there often. I read books, use a PC and wach movies sometimes.
I am looking for a place to live in, I would consiter how close subway station and bus stop. It makes me go to destination place quickly. So I can save time. If it is housing complex and if it is safe even in the night. And I would consider how far library and community cener

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The library is my favorite spot for entertaining myself in my neighborhood. I go there often. I read books, use a PC, and watch movies sometimes.

If I am looking for a new place to live, I consider if it is a housing complex and if it is safe at night. I also consider how close it is to the subway station and bus stop. This allows me go to the destination place quickly, and I can save time. I would also consider how far it is from the library and the community center.

**Teacher's Note:

Hi, Junie. Great job! This is very well written. I fixed a couple spelling mistakes and added a few missing words. I also changed the location of your last sentence. Now, it flows a little bit better because you are talking about the distance from the housing complex to all the important places you would want to go! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know in class! :) -Alexis