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제목 Lesson 9 review 등록일 2023-06-05
내용 Good evening, Kevin!
Please check for e-mail address and I don't know your email address.

*New words
-Our ship is flag ship product is the IPHONE.
-We are differntiate other company.
-We don't know for second -generation, but we will find it.
-I miss you, truly.
-The movie is very impressive.

*Grammar Point
-Could you provide for evidence to us?
-It provides you with so many funny.
담당강사 Grant2usa 등록일 2023-06-07
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Good evening, Kevin!
Please check for e-mail address and I don't know your email address.

*New words
-Our ship is flag ship product is the IPHONE.
-We are differntiate other company.
-We don't know for second -generation, but we will find it.
-I miss you, truly.
-The movie is very impressive.

 

Hello here are the corrections

*Grammar Point
-Could you provide for evidence to us?
-It provides you with so many funny.

 

Here are the correct terms

-This is our flagship product  the IPHONE.
-We  differntiate from other companies.
-We don't know about a  second -generation product but we will find out.


-I miss you, truly.
-The movie was very impressive.
*Grammar Points

-Could you provide  evidence for us?
-It provides hours of fun entertainment.
 
Please let me know if  you need anything else.
 
Kevin
 

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