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제목 | My family | 등록일 | 2023-06-09 |
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내용 | There are 3 people in my family. I have been married for 7years and my son was born 4 years ago. when I was young, my father has tried to be friend with me that I remember. As my father did, I also try to be friend with my son. sometime it is not easy becuase I can spend time with my son after work but when I arrive at home, my feeling like getting tired. I think to be good father is very difficult... |
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담당강사 | Russ2usa | 등록일 | 2023-06-09 |
첨삭 내용 | There are 3 people in my family. I have been married for 7years and my son was born 4 years ago. when I was young, my father has tried to be friend with me that I remember. EDIT There are three people in my family. I have been married for seven years and have a four year old son. |