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제목 Propose food menu items 등록일 2023-06-15
내용 I got your message saying that you want to sell food items with tea which are profitable and appeal to customers. I think it is good idea to sell dessert menu such as cakes and cookies, especially scones would be popular because English tea makes me think scone with strawberry jam.
And, we can invite popular bolger. They can review of our products and people will know how delicous they are.
They post them online and So this is good way to reach out to customers. If customers ordered food items we get to know what item is the best and what items to be extend more.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-06-16
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I got your message saying that you want to sell food items with tea which are profitable and appeal to customers. I think it is good idea to sell dessert menu such as cakes and cookies, especially scones would be popular because English tea makes me think scone with strawberry jam.
And, we can invite popular bolger. They can review of our products and people will know how delicous they are.
They post them online and So this is good way to reach out to customers. If customers ordered food items we get to know what item is the best and what items to be extend more.

 

Selling dessert options like cakes and cookies, especially scones, would be a fantastic idea, in my opinion. English tea makes me think of scones with strawberry jam. We can also invite popular bloggers. People will learn about their reviews of our items and how delicious they are. They post them online, so this is a good way to reach out to customers. Customers' orders for meals give us information on which items are the best and which need to be offered more frequently.

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