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제목 From morning to evening 등록일 2023-06-15
내용 I wake up at 5:30 a.m. I have call with Mangolang at 6.
I go to work at 6: 30 or 8 depens on which office I go to, beause I can choose the office where have different conditions.
In the case of yesterday I departured for work at 6:30.
After work I went to classical music concert the city sympony orchestra.
The sympony orchestra which is funded by public authority is good but I am not so enjoyed.
Because I don't know know about classical music. so that is sometimes good , sometimes so so.
I was so tired when I came back home but it was good day I think.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-06-16
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I wake up at 5:30 a.m. I have call with Mangolang at 6.
I go to work at 6: 30 or 8 depens on which office I go to, beause I can choose the office where have different conditions.
In the case of yesterday I departured for work at 6:30.
After work I went to classical music concert the city sympony orchestra.
The sympony orchestra which is funded by public authority is good but I am not so enjoyed.
Because I don't know know about classical music. so that is sometimes good , sometimes so so.
I was so tired when I came back home but it was good day I think.

 

I wake up at 5:30 a.m. I have a call with Mangolang at 6. I go to work at 6:30 or 8, depending on which office I go to, because I can choose the office where the conditions are different.In the case of yesterday, I left for work at 6:30. After work, I went to a classical music concert with the city Symphony Orchestra.The Symphony Orchestra, which is funded by public authority, is good, but I am not so impressed because I don't know much about classical music. So that is sometimes good, sometimes so-so.I was so tired when I came back home, but it was a good day, I think.

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