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제목 The action according to renovating store 등록일 2023-07-10
내용 On this month renovating our store cause noise, dust and other inconvenience. So we need to act something for customers.
First, we can build temporary high wall to minimize noise and dust.
Second, we can post notificationat several spot on the wall and put sign board at the parking lot.
Third, we can give some discount to customers visiting our store.
I am sure these are basic and affordable action.
Call me back if you have any question or further discussion.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-07-11
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On this month renovating our store cause noise, dust and other inconvenience. So we need to act something for customers.
First, we can build temporary high wall to minimize noise and dust.
Second, we can post notificationat several spot on the wall and put sign board at the parking lot.
Third, we can give some discount to customers visiting our store.
I am sure these are basic and affordable action.
Call me back if you have any question or further discussion.

his month, renovating our store caused noise, dust, and other inconveniences. So we need to do something for customers. First, we can build a temporary high wall to minimize noise and dust.Second, we can post notices in several spots on the wall and put up signs in the parking lot.Third, we can give some discounts to customers visiting our store.I am sure these are basic and affordable actions.Call me back if you have any questions or need further discussion.

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