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제목 Pelease check my wrighting 등록일 2023-07-11
내용 actually next wednesday I have a test so I'd like to verify my wrighting is going well or not.
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I think taking vacations in the countryside is better than going to a large city.
there are several reasons to support my opinion.
first, they could fill fresh air because there are not many cars in the countryside
second, It is possible to have new experience when I was young I have been in the countryside on vacation, at that time i saw new things such as cow, wide field
therefore taking vacations in the contryside id better than going to a large cit
담당강사 Deborah2usa 등록일 2023-07-13
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actually next wednesday I have a test so I'd like to verify my writing is going well or not.
If you don't unterstand pelease check and reply

I think taking vacations in the countryside is better than going to a large city.
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
First, they could feel fresh air because there are not many cars in the countryside.
Second, it is possible to have a new experience. When I was young I went to the countryside on vacation. At that time i saw new things such as cows and wide fields,
therefore taking vacations in the contryside is better than going to a large city.

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