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제목 Rainy season 등록일 2023-07-13
내용 July is the rainy season in Korea. I went to the hair salon on impulse yesterday as my hair was messy due to the high humidity. I dried my hair so hard but it didn't work at all. So, I had straightened my hair at the salon. I thought I should've done it last month before the rainy season started. I don't know if it's because it rains a lot these days, but I heard there are lots of people who are not feeling well like getting a cold. I need to plan my workout and take care of my health this summer so that I can have a healthy and enjoyable summer with full energy. I have to be diligent again.
담당강사 Ellen2usa 등록일 2023-07-14
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July is the rainy season in Korea. I went to the hair salon on impulse yesterday as my hair was messy due to the high humidity. I dried my hair so well, but it didn't work at all. So, I had straightened my hair at the salon. I thought I should've done it last month before the rainy season started. I don't know if it's because it rains a lot these days, but I heard there are lots of people who are not feeling well and they're getting a cold. I need to plan my workout and take care of my health this summer so that I can have a healthy and enjoyable summer full of energy. I have to be diligent again!

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