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제목 Deciding accommodations 등록일 2023-07-13
내용 It's difficult to decide the accommodations for our trip. I consider price and distance from the main tourist attractions, but my sister considers design, so there was a little clash of opinions. We decided to set a budget first and then decide by voting among candidates. Once we dicide it, we should make specific schedule later.
Many people will travel a lot this summer as they haven't been abroad for about 2 years due to Covid19. Three of us are looking forward to activities to do and also the trip itself. As it will be our first overseas trip, I want to leave a lot of great memories there.
담당강사 Ellen2usa 등록일 2023-07-14
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It's difficult to decide the accommodations for our trip. I considered the price and distance from the main tourist attractions, but my sister considers design, so there was a little clash of opinions. We decided to set a budget first and then decided by voting among candidates. Once we decide, we should make a specific schedule later.
Many people will travel a lot this summer as they haven't been abroad for about 2 years due to Covid 19. Three of us are looking forward to activities to do and also the trip itself. As it will be our first overseas trip, I want to leave a lot of great memories there.

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