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제목 | A fancy cafe in the suburbs | 등록일 | 2023-07-17 |
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내용 | I went to a fancy cafe located in the suburbs with my friend yesterday. It hardly rained and the weather was nice, so we felt like we were going traveling. We found that the cafe was packed with lot of people. We placed an order and sat down on chairs. As I saw in the pictures of the cafe before, the atmosphere there was nice. A shortcoming was uncomfortable chairs. They were hard and uncomfortable to sit for a long time. In addition, the table was too low to search for info using my laptop. The cafe was so instagramable which is popular these days. This type of cafe is on the rise recently. | ||
담당강사 | Ellen2usa | 등록일 | 2023-07-21 |
첨삭 내용 | I went to a fancy cafe located in the suburbs with my friend yesterday. It hardly rained and the weather was nice, so we felt like we were traveling. We found that the cafe was packed with a lot of people. We placed an order and sat down on the chairs. As I saw in the pictures of the cafe before, the atmosphere there was nice. The shortcoming was uncomfortable chairs. They were hard and uncomfortable to sit in for a long time. In addition, the table was too low to search for info using my laptop. The cafe was so Instagram which is popular these days. This type of cafe is on the rise recently. |