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제목 During the week I eat lunch 등록일 2023-07-20
내용 During the week I usually eat at work rather than go somewhere else.
This is because it saves me time, about 30 minutes. And food is cooked daily and nutrition is considered. I thik these food is fresh than somewhere else.
for example vegitabe is served everyday. moreover price is cheaper.

I usually bring my bag with my laptop, my wallet, a peice of paper and smartphone when I go to work
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-07-24
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During the week I usually eat at work rather than go somewhere else.
This is because it saves me time, about 30 minutes. And food is cooked daily and nutrition is considered. I thik these food is fresh than somewhere else.
for example vegitabe is served everyday. moreover price is cheaper.

I usually bring my bag with my laptop, my wallet, a peice of paper and smartphone when I go to work

 

During the week, I usually eat at work rather than go somewhere else.This is because it saves me time—about 30 minutes. Food is cooked daily, and I take nutrition seriously. I think these foods are fresher than somewhere else. For example, vegetable soup is served every day. Moreover, the price is cheaper. I usually bring my bag, laptop, wallet, a piece of paper, and my smartphone when I go to work.

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