This summer I decided to go the ranch because I watched a very intersting video about a sheep dog teasing a sheep.
So my family planned to go to the ranch.

When I was supposed to visit the ranch, the weather was raining like crazy, contrary to the forecast.
I called the ranch and asked if I could change my reservation.
But they couldn't cancel schedule, so I just decided to visit the ranch. (or I just decided to go anyway)
Fortunately, when we arrived, the rain stopped.
The grassy pasture was elegant after the rain ended.
Although I couldn't see any animals, I still felt nature after a long time.

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