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제목 Is education appropriate for students? 등록일 2023-07-23
내용 When I was a student, I couldn't receive an efficient education on investment or investment techniques at school. I am not sure about how schools are teaching about investment to students these days, but I think the education should include more practical ways in investment. It shouldn't be only technical knowledge to do well on the exams required to enter university. Students will be able to live a happier life if they can be learned about what they really want to be in the future or practical ways to invest in reality. I want them to know that good grades are not everything in one's life.
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When I was a student, I couldn't receive an efficient education on investment or investment techniques at school. I am not sure about how schools are teaching investment to students these days, but I think education should include more practical ways of investment. It shouldn't be only technical knowledge to do well on the exams required to enter university. Students will be able to live a happier life if they can learn about what they really want to be in the future or practical ways to invest in reality. I want them to know that good grades are not everything in one's life.

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