I studied topic about "Paperback Book versus E-readers" with my teacher last class. As the development of technology, e-readers have been become widespread throughout all over the round the world these days. That's why I use it every single day. I am a very bookworm, so I am dying to read many kinds of books. I used to prefer a paperback book because I like to feel senses of book from the book. There are feelings like the unique smell of the paper, touching of the book and memos.Unfortunately, e-readers' handiness and convenience outweigh paperback's feelings nowadays.

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I studied about "Paperback Book versus E-readers" with my teacher last class. As the development of technology, e-readers have become widespread round the world these days. That's why I use it every single day. I am a bookworm, so I am dying to read many kinds of books. I used to prefer a paperback book because I like to feel the book. There are feelings like the unique smell of the paper, touching the book and memos.Unfortunately, e-readers' handiness and convenience outweigh paperback's feelings nowadays.

Hi Tony!

Thanks for expanding the discussion about the topic through this composition. As I've observed, you were able to give your explanation and precise details of what you wanted to convey. Although some corrections and changes made were needed in order to show the other terms that you may use and making the information clearer since some terms are not necessary to use and it could make it more complicated to understand. Therefore, making it simpler would definitely highlight what you want to express. Overall, it's been great and I want you to maintain your eagerness to learn

Teacher Neiz