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제목 20230726 등록일 2023-07-26
내용 Here Dhaka is raining now.
I heard that this season is rainy day but it's been a long time since I saw it rain.
It's good thing to us that it rains for the fresh air, ther are also inconveniences like traffic jam.
The road condition is not good when it rains, cause there are no traffic signal in here so many traffic congestion occurs.
Maybe tomorrow will not rain and hope that there are no traffic congestion in Gulshan area.
담당강사 Charisse 등록일 2023-07-27
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It's raining in Dhaka now.  I heard that it's rainy season but it's been a long time since I saw it rain, It's a good thing for us that it rains for the fresh air but there are also inconveniences like traffic jam. The road condition here  is not good when it rains because there are no traffic signals. Hence, many traffic congestion occurs. Maybe tomorrow it will not rain and  I hope that there are no trafffic congestion in Gulshan area.

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