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제목 | I make sentences using various words. But I think there are wrong sentences a lot.. | 등록일 | 2023-08-12 |
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내용 | That director's the way to use color in the movie is the reason He is my favorite director. I want to go to the premiere that my favorite director coming. I couldn't go that premiere because it started at the other country. All of the movies that Christopher Nolan is made are awsome. I swear with my whole life. Are you really do it with your whole life? That doll was her favorite. I think the concert starts around ten past seven. When have you been exercising? He is a Korean director and he made the Parasite movie. When I watch the movie Spiderman, it was awsome so I couldn't close my mouth. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-08-14 |
첨삭 내용 | That director's the way to use color in the movie is the reason He is my favorite director. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hello!~ Thanks for trying your best in making sentences!~ Good job!~ Keep it up!~ ^^ By the way, let me give some helpful corrections. Kindly check them. ^^ That director's the way to use color in the movie is the reason He is my favorite director.
All of the movies that Christopher Nolan is made are awsome.
Are you really do it with your whole life?
When I watch the movie Spiderman, it was awsome so I couldn't close my mouth.
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