Hello, Jini!~ 

Wow!~ Thank you for letting me know more about you!~ ^^ I really appreciate your wonderful effort to improve and learn more. Keep it up!~ ^^ 

By the way, I made some corrections. Kindly check if you have spare time. Thanks!~ ^^ Talk to you later!~ ^^ 

--Teacher Lynda^^ 

CORRECTIONS:

I'm twenty-one years old. And I've been working in an animation production studio for two years. Our company creates children's television shows. In reality, I aspired to work for a film production firm. But I've been to this company and I'm pleased. I wanted to work for Marvel Studios because I am a Marvel fan, but once my favorite character died, my heart cooled. So now I want to work at the Pixar animation studios. I enjoy watching movies, thus I believe my career path is destined for production. If I improve my English, I plan to apply to companies in different countries.