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제목 I wrote my experience about the events. 등록일 2023-08-18
내용 When I was high school student, I went the events that actors visit in Korea. One of them is 'Avengers:Endgame' and another is 'Spider-man:Far from home'. I made a art to apply that event, and I was picked. I was so happy and I couldn't wait to see my favorite actor. And I went there, I could see reality iron man. In the Spider-man event, I got signatures of main actors. I was really excited because I couldn't expect I can get their signatures. Standing is so hard for a few hours, but it was very nice memories to me. If I can have a chance, I want to go the event one more time.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-08-22
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When I was high school student, I went the events that actors visit in Korea. One of them is 'Avengers:Endgame' and another is 'Spider-man:Far from home'. I made a art to apply that event, and I was picked. I was so happy and I couldn't wait to see my favorite actor. And I went there, I could see reality iron man. In the Spider-man event, I got signatures of main actors. I was really excited because I couldn't expect I can get their signatures. Standing is so hard for a few hours, but it was very nice memories to me. If I can have a chance, I want to go the event one more time.

 

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I used to go to the gatherings that actors attend in Korea when I was in high school. 'Avengers:Endgame' is one of them, while 'Spider-Man:Far from Home' is another. I created an art piece to submit for that event, and I was chosen. I was overjoyed and excited to see my favorite actor. And when I went there, I saw reality's Iron Man. I obtained signatures from the main actors at the Spider-Man event. I was overjoyed because I hadn't expected to acquire their signatures. Standing for a couple hours is exhausting, but it brings back wonderful memories for me. If I get the chance, I'd like to attend the event again.

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