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| 제목 | I will tell you what I did today. | 등록일 | 2023-08-20 |
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| 내용 | Hi, I'm Jini. I did a new something today. It's a study group through the internet. Every person turns on the camera, and work their own task. I join the group and talk what I will do in here first. When time goes by we talk what we did each. It's that all, but I was nervous because it's my first session. It's like when I called with you at first. In reality, I wanted to join the 'only text' group, but I thought speaking others will help to improve my English. Also I couldn't speak English well, but I will try this again next weekend. Please wish my luck. Have a good day! | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-08-22 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTIONS: Hi, I'm Jini. I tried something new today. It's an internet-based study group. Everyone turns on the camera and work on their own task. I join the group and discuss what I will do first in here. We'll chat about what we did later. That's it, although I was nervous because it was my first session. It's like when I called with you at first. In reality, I wanted to join the 'only text' group, but I reasoned that conversing with others would help me improve my English. Also, I couldn't communicate properly in English, but I'll try again next weekend. Please send me your best wishes.
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