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| 제목 | I didn't need to push the class back. | 등록일 | 2023-08-21 |
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| 내용 | Usually I use both car and subway fot commute, first by car to subway station and then take subway to work. There was huge traffice jam when I left home so I belived it took a lot more time to subway station then usaual. I opend class app and push today's class back. But after a few minute, cars in road went well and I arrived subway station on time. I didn't neet to postpone my class today. | ||
| 담당강사 | Jace1usa | 등록일 | 2023-08-21 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Usually I use both car and subway fot commute, first by car to subway station and then take subway to work. There was huge traffice jam when I left home so I belived it took a lot more time to subway station then usaual. I opend class app and push today's class back. But after a few minute, cars in road went well and I arrived subway station on time. I didn't neet to postpone my class today. Hello, Kim Huiju! There are a few mistakes and corrections needed in the statement you provided. "Usually I use both car and Subway fot commute, first by car to subway station and then takes Subway to work." Correction: "Usually, I commute using both a car and the subway, first by car to the subway station and then take the subway to work." Explanation: - "Both car and Subway": Instead of saying "both car," it should be "both a car" to indicate the use of a specific car. - "fot commute": This should be "for my commute" to indicate the purpose of using the car and subway. - "then takes Subway": The verb "takes" should be changed to "take" to match the plural subject "I." "There was huge traffic jam when I left home so I belived it took a lot more time to subway station then usaual." Correction: "There was a huge traffic jam when I left home, so I believed it would take a lot more time to get to the subway station than usual." Explanation: - "a huge traffic jam": To make the statement grammatically correct, we need to include the indefinite article "a" before "huge." - "it took a lot more time to subway station": To talk about the future from the past perspective, we use "would" after "I believed," e.g., "I believed it would take." - "then usaual": It should be "than usual" to indicate a comparison. "I opend class app and push today's class back." Correction: "I opened the class app and rescheduled today's class." Explanation: - "opend class app": "Opend" should be "opened" to use the correct past tense form of the verb "open." - "push today's class back": Instead of "push," use "rescheduled" to indicate that the class was moved to a later time. "But after a few minute, cars and road went well and I arrived subway station on time." Correction: "But after a few minutes, traffic cleared up, and I arrived at the subway station on time." Explanation: - "after a few minute": "Minute" should be plural, so it should be "after a few minutes." - "cars and road went well": Specify that the traffic cleared up by saying "traffic cleared up" instead of "cars and road went well." - "I arrived subway station": Include the article "at" before "subway station" to indicate the location properly. "I didn't neet to postpone my class today." Correction: "I didn't need to postpone my class today." Explanation: - "neet": "Neet" needs to be corrected to "need" for the correct spelling. By making these corrections, the statement becomes grammatically accurate and clearer in conveying the intended meaning. | ||