수강기간 중 영어로 일기 또는 자유로운 글을 작성해 주세요.
담당 강사가 직접 교정을 해 드립니다.
제목 | Salaries based on the persion's skill | 등록일 | 2023-08-25 |
---|---|---|---|
내용 | I think salaries should be decided based on the person's skill not base on how long the person has worked there. First is motivation. we will work hard and stay with the company. Because money is strong motivation to work harder and better. As a result, befits go to companies Second is personal development. We will learn more skills and prepare for the future. If we are not learn we are goning to fall behind. It is not good for a person and company Third is fair. If we earn salaried based on how long we have worked, the will to do good job disappeared and young emplyees will leave. |
||
담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2023-08-27 |
첨삭 내용 | I think salaries should be decided based on the person's skill not base on how long the person has worked there.
I think salaries should be decided based on the person's skills, not on how long the person has worked there. The first is motivation. We will work hard and stay with the company. Because money is a strong motivation to work harder and better, it benefits companies. The second is personal development. We will learn more skills and prepare for the future. If we do not learn, we are going to fall behind. It is not good for the person or the company. The third is fairness. If we earn a salary based on how long we have worked, work performance will be affected, and young employees will eventually leave the company. |