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제목 If I were hosting a party, food.. 등록일 2023-08-25
내용 If I were hosting a party, I would be more likey have food delivered from restaurants.
becase I can more concentrate on the guests. Moreover I can not worry about the taste of food.
I don't want to guests happy with dishes.

If I am looking for a place to live in I would consider how close public transportaion is.
It would be easy for me to go to places such as restuarants, shopping centers and workplace.
And I can save time instead of wasting on the road and it makes me more people person.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-08-27
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If I were hosting a party, I would be more likey have food delivered from restaurants.
becase I can more concentrate on the guests. Moreover I can not worry about the taste of food.
I don't want to guests happy with dishes.

If I am looking for a place to live in I would consider how close public transportaion is.
It would be easy for me to go to places such as restuarants, shopping centers and workplace.
And I can save time instead of wasting on the road and it makes me more people person.

 

If I were hosting a party, I would be more likely to have food delivered from restaurants.
I can save more time and concentrate more on the guests. Moreover, I do not worry about the taste of food.

 

I don't want to guests happy with dishes. ( You don't want your guests to feel happy with the food you ordered? ) 



If I am looking for a place to live, I would consider how close public transportation is.
It would be easy for me to go to places such as restaurants, shopping centres, and my workplace.
And I can save time instead of wasting it on my commute. This helps me become more aware of my surroundings and blend in with the crowd. 

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