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제목 | If I were hosting a party, food.. | 등록일 | 2023-08-25 |
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내용 | If I were hosting a party, I would be more likey have food delivered from restaurants. becase I can more concentrate on the guests. Moreover I can not worry about the taste of food. I don't want to guests happy with dishes. If I am looking for a place to live in I would consider how close public transportaion is. It would be easy for me to go to places such as restuarants, shopping centers and workplace. And I can save time instead of wasting on the road and it makes me more people person. |
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담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2023-08-27 |
첨삭 내용 | If I were hosting a party, I would be more likey have food delivered from restaurants.
If I were hosting a party, I would be more likely to have food delivered from restaurants.
I don't want to guests happy with dishes. ( You don't want your guests to feel happy with the food you ordered? )
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