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제목 I made some sentences from lesson six. I always appreciate to your reply. 등록일 2023-08-27
내용 To inquire in the class is important for student.
You don't enter that field mindlessly because it is estate.
All clients went the famuse real estate agent.
This client discussing with real estate agent about two estates to choose more better one.
constracting must be carful.
That player extended his constract.
If you connect with him, you put him through to me.
He will come back in a second.
I'm calling to the real estate agent to inquire about the estate that I saw last week, but they don't answer yet.
This client keeps calling to us until last month.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-08-28
첨삭 내용

Hello, Jini!~ 

I highly commend your diligence to practice your vocabulary. Keep it up!~ 

Kindly check the corrections for further improvement. Have a nice day!~ ^^ 

--Lynda^^ 

 

CORRECTIONS:

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Inquiry in class is essential for students.
You don't just go into that field because it's real estate.
All of the clients went to the famous real estate agent.
This client is debating between two estates with a real estate agent in order to select the best one.
Contracting must be done with caution.
That player's contract was extended.
You put him through to me if you connect with him.
He'll be there in a second.
I'm calling the real estate agent to inquire about the house I visited last week, but they haven't returned my call yet.
This client has been calling us since last month.

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