I visited graves the tomb of our ancestors with my relatives to cut weeks around the grave early in the morning on Sunday. We always do that once a year to repay them for birthing giving birth and bring up raising us on the last Sunday of August before Chuseok. After that, we had an energy-boosting lunch lunch like such as grilled pork, eel and ginseng chicken soup together By while catching up things. It was hard but a rewarding experience. I will keep treasure it with them.

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I visited the tomb of our ancestors with my relatives to cut weeks around the grave early in the morning on Sunday.
We always do that once a year to repay them for giving birth and raising us on the last Sunday of August before Chuseok. After that, we had an energy-boosting lunch such as grilled pork, eel and ginseng chicken soup together while catching up. It was hard but a rewarding experience. I will treasure it with them.

Hi Tony,

Thank you for sharing of what happened during your weekend. I tried to chnage only few words to be more appropriate or closer to what you wanted to convey. Also, it's better to explain simpler words, then as you keep on improving, you may continue to use other new vcabulary words so that your sentences won't be too complicated and with that, it would be easier to understand what you wanted to express. Nevertheless, you were still able to give a precise details in your composition.

Teacher Neiz