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제목 Football 등록일 2023-08-28
내용 I am not a fan of football, so I didn’t watched club game before.
But this July a Korean football player who was played in La Liga league in Spain transferred to PSG ( Paris St-Germain). I came across that news. I’m getting more and more interested in football. So I went to the football stadium to watch a game. Yesterday the match was so exciting because 5 minutes before the end, the losing team scored a goal. The game was drawn 2:2. Cheers are doubled by playing hard without giving up. In real life it’s hard to do, but players do that. I guess that's charm of the football.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-08-29
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I am not a fan of football, so I didn’t watched club game before.
But this July a Korean football player who was played in La Liga league in Spain transferred to PSG ( Paris St-Germain). I came across that news. I’m getting more and more interested in football. So I went to the football stadium to watch a game. Yesterday the match was so exciting because 5 minutes before the end, the losing team scored a goal. The game was drawn 2:2. Cheers are doubled by playing hard without giving up. In real life it’s hard to do, but players do that. I guess that's charm of the football.

 

I am not a fan of football, so I haven’t watched club games before.But this July, I came across the news that a Korean football player who played in the La Liga league in Spain transferred to PSG (Paris St-Germain). I’m getting more and more interested in football. So I went to the football stadium to watch a game. Yesterday's match was so exciting because, five minutes before the end, the losing team scored a goal. The game was drawn 2:2. The cheers became wilder because they were playing hard without giving up. Players do things that are difficult to do in reality. That must be part of football's appeal.

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