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제목 Kagongjok 등록일 2023-08-31
내용 Kagongjok is someone who study at a cafe for long time. They pay but they stay too long.
So some cafe has a time limiting policy. they posted a notice saying, additional order required for use of
more than 3 hours. This has emerged as an issue to cafe owner. On the othr hand I think this phenomenon shows Korean forced to study a lot on their own. Like I take a English class at Mangolang and I hope to improve everyday with correction of sentence by the teacher or motivation by myself through this class. We tend to prepare for the future rather than enjoy present life.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-09-01
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Kagongjok is someone who study at a cafe for long time. They pay but they stay too long.
So some cafe has a time limiting policy. they posted a notice saying, additional order required for use of
more than 3 hours. This has emerged as an issue to cafe owner. On the othr hand I think this phenomenon shows Korean forced to study a lot on their own. Like I take a English class at Mangolang and I hope to improve everyday with correction of sentence by the teacher or motivation by myself through this class. We tend to prepare for the future rather than enjoy present life.

 

Kagongjok is someone who studies at a cafe for a long time. They pay, but they stay too long.
So some cafes posted a time-limit policy. The post says:  order is required for use of more than 3 hours. This has created an issue for cafe owners. On the other hand, I think this situation shows that Koreans are forced to study a lot on their own. I take an English lesson at Mangolang, and I aspire to get better every day through the teacher's sentence corrections or my own motivation. We tend to prepare for the future rather than enjoy the present.

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