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제목 A diary on Tuesday 등록일 2023-09-06
내용 I studied about veganism with my teacher yesterday. To prepare for the class, I searched for internet articles.
There was something interesting for me. The news is that Seoul government promoted veganism to fight climate crisis.
They had a plan to disseminate what veganism means and why many people should adapt to it.
As the majority of the public are still unfamiliar with it.
I think I join with it right away, I would do that in the future for the environment
It's time to think of that deeply
담당강사 Neiz 등록일 2023-09-06
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I studied about veganism with my teacher yesterday. To prepare for the class, I searched on the internet for articles.
There was Something was interesting for me. The news is that Seoul government promoted veganism to fight climate crisis. They had a plan to disseminate what veganism means and why many people should adapt to ita, as the majority of the public are still unfamiliar with it. I think I will join with it right away, I would do that in the future for the environment. It's time to think of that deeply.

 

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I studied about veganism with my teacher yesterday. To prepare for the class, I searched on the internet for articles. Something was interesting for me. The news is that Seoul government promoted veganism to fight climate crisis. They had a plan to disseminate what veganism means and why many people should adapt to it, as the majority of the public are still unfamiliar with it. I think I will join with it right away, I would do that in the future for the environment. It's time to think of that deeply.

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