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제목	Healthy life	등록일	2023-09-06
내용	From few years ago, managing health is my mission. Because I have two daughters and I have to care them until after their marriages. But I didn't successful diet for many years. Losing weight is hard mission for me. I just lost weight by eating so many little tomatos. I was helpful for diet without work out. I lost almost 10kg by this way. I brought tomatos everyday in the home, company, amusementpark etc. I know now I have to restart eating tomatos again. But as you know it's a little annoy things for me. Buying, Washing, Bringing... I bring tomatos about 90 minutes... But I will start it!
담당강사	rosey	등록일	2023-09-06
첨삭 내용	From few years ago, managing health is my mission. Because I have two daughters, I have to care for them until after their marriages. But I didn't succeed in my diet for many years. Losing weight is a hard mission for me. I just lost weight by eating so many little tomatoes. It was helpful for my diet even without working out. I lost almost 10kg in this way. I brought tomatoes anywhere I go. I know now that I have to eat tomatoes again. But as you know it's a little annoying for me. Buying, Washing, Bringing... I carry tomatoes for about 90 minutes... But I will start it!