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제목 I made sentences with words and expressions in lesson 8 등록일 2023-09-06
내용 The electricity supply wasn't smooth and all the house of city was blackout.
This construction was stopped bacause the material ran short.
If you want to reach the top of your job you will study hard more than now.
He said call me anytime but he never was available.
This project will end about tomorrow morning.
If the match started at the moment we can't move the seat.
I left messages to my mom but she didn't reply and any call back.
My old brother's taste as strange as my father.
I hate him as much as you hate your x-boyfriend.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-09-08
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Hello, Jini!~ ^^

I always commend your diligence in developing your skills through writing. Keep it up!~ ^^

By the way, kindly check the corrections I made. Hope these will be of help. ^^ Have a nice weekend! ~ ^^ Take care! ~ ^^

--Lynda^^

**CORRECTIONS:

The electricity supply wasn't smooth and all the house of city was blackout.

**The electricity supply was disrupted, and the entire city was blacked out.

 

This construction was stopped bacause the material ran short.

** This construction project was halted due to a lack of materials.


If you want to reach the top of your job you will study hard more than now.

** If you want to advance in your career, you must study harder than you are currently.


He said call me anytime but he never was available.

** He stated he could call me at any time, but he was never available.


This project will end about tomorrow morning.

**This project will end tomorrow morning.


If the match started at the moment we can't move the seat.

** We can't move the seat if the game starts right now.


I left messages to my mom but she didn't reply and any call back.

**I left messages to my mom but she didn’t reply and didn’t call me back either.


My old brother's taste as strange as my father.

** My older brother’s taste is as strange as my father’s.

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