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제목 | I made sentences with words in lesson nine. | 등록일 | 2023-09-09 |
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내용 | I'm looking for someone to work instead of me tomorrow. You should confirm the orders that came by last week and send a package. I order the chair on this site because this site is the cheaper than others. I bought my favorite singer's goods that I couldn't buy before because it was in stock. My shoes when I bought last month are shipped today. He said the product will be shipped within a week but it wasn't shipped yet. I promised to cook dinner instead of my mom. He have made a junior staff send an email instead of him, but she forgot it. I'll buy it absolute if there is in stock. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-09-12 |
첨삭 내용 | I'm looking for someone to work instead of me tomorrow. --> I'm looking for someone to replace me at work tomorrow.
--> You should send a package and confirm the orders that came in last week.
--> I order the chair on this site since this site offers cheaper prices than others.
--> I bought my favorite singer's goods that I couldn't buy then since it was finally in stock.
--> My shoes, which I purchased last month, were shipped today.
**Correct sentence! ^^ Good job!~ ^^
**Correct sentence!~ ^^ Good job!~ ^^
--> He had a junior staff member send an email in his place, but she forgot.
--> If it's available, I'll buy it right away. |