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제목 I made sentences with words in lesson nine. 등록일 2023-09-09
내용 I'm looking for someone to work instead of me tomorrow.
You should confirm the orders that came by last week and send a package.
I order the chair on this site because this site is the cheaper than others.
I bought my favorite singer's goods that I couldn't buy before because it was in stock.
My shoes when I bought last month are shipped today.
He said the product will be shipped within a week but it wasn't shipped yet.
I promised to cook dinner instead of my mom.
He have made a junior staff send an email instead of him, but she forgot it.
I'll buy it absolute if there is in stock.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-09-12
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I'm looking for someone to work instead of me tomorrow.

--> I'm looking for someone to replace me at work tomorrow.


You should confirm the orders that came by last week and send a package.

--> You should send a package and confirm the orders that came in last week.


I order the chair on this site because this site is the cheaper than others.

--> I order the chair on this site since this site offers cheaper prices than others. 


I bought my favorite singer's goods that I couldn't buy before because it was in stock.

--> I bought my favorite singer's goods that I couldn't buy then since it was finally in stock. 


My shoes when I bought last month are shipped today.

--> My shoes, which I purchased last month, were shipped today.


He said the product will be shipped within a week but it wasn't shipped yet.

**Correct sentence! ^^ Good job!~ ^^ 


I promised to cook dinner instead of my mom.

**Correct sentence!~ ^^ Good job!~ ^^ 


He have made a junior staff send an email instead of him, but she forgot it.

--> He had a junior staff member send an email in his place, but she forgot.


I'll buy it absolute if there is in stock.

--> If it's available, I'll buy it right away. 

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