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제목 I wrote what I did Tuesday. 등록일 2023-09-10
내용 I saw the musical 'The Phantom of the Opera' with my mom. I was very excited because I wanted to see this musical. I couldn't get a ticket until second reservation, but I got two tickets in third reservation. Our seats were second row on the edge. I was worried that we wouldn't see the other side well, but that wasn't big problem because our seats were front seat. There were lots of effect that I couldn't expect. And main actor's sing was very awesome. Last climax was horrifyingly superb. In reality, I have only expected main actor, but all of the actors were great.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-09-12
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I saw the musical "The Phantom of the Opera" with my mom. I was quite excited because I had been looking forward to seeing this show. I didn't obtain a ticket until the second reservation, but I got two in the third. Our seats were on the second row, right on the edge. I was concerned that we wouldn't be able to see the other side clearly, but it wasn't a problem because our seats were in the front row. There were a number of unexpected effects. And the main actor's singing was fantastic. The final conclusion was terrifyingly good. In actuality, I was expecting simply the main actor, but all of the actors were excellent.

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