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제목 | Advantages of traveling in India | 등록일 | 2023-09-12 |
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내용 | First, It’s diverse country, so you can see many people when you travel place to place. As well as tourist workers such as drivers, sales people, general people also interest in traveler and they may talk to you. Due to noises in the street and unclean environment, you may sensitive in unusual places, but you may not be bored. Second, if you are low budget traveler, it would be good. There are various and cheap foods you can try. There are inexpensive accommodations, so you can find suitable one. Third, security isn't bad. If you're careful there is no problem. Basically, I don't roam at nigh |
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담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2023-09-13 |
첨삭 내용 | First, It’s diverse country, so you can see many people when you travel place to place.
First, it's a diverse country, so you can see many people when you travel from place to place. As well as tourist workers such as drivers, salespeople, and general people. They also have an interest in travellers, and they may talk to you. Due to noises in the street and an unclean environment, you may be sensitive in unusual places, but you may not be bored. Second, if you are a low-budget traveller, it would be good. There are various cheap foods you can try. There are inexpensive accommodations, so you can find a suitable one. Third, security isn't bad. If you're careful, there is no problem. Basically, I don't roam at night. |