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| 제목 | The writing topic is K-pop. | 등록일 | 2023-10-03 |
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| 내용 | I think K-pop is the first thing that when we come up Korea. Also, I'm a fan of K-pop and I have the most favorite boy idol group. It isn't BTS. But I think BTS contributed to spread K-pop. Many people want to be an idol such as BTS, so many idol groups make one's debut lately. I have known the name of all of the idol groups as a student, but now I don't know well which groups are there. It's a little bit cold, and I think they have to make one's debut with confidence of success. I think the more K-pop is popular the more unknown idol groups was forgotten. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-10-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Correction: When we think of Korea, I believe the first thing that comes to mind is K-pop. In addition, I enjoy K-pop and have a favorite boy idol group. It's not BTS. However, I believe BTS helped to popularize K-pop. numerous people aspire to be idols like BTS, therefore numerous idol groups have recently debuted. As a student, I knew the names of all the idol groups, but today I'm not sure which ones are there. It's a touch chilly, and I believe they must make their debut with confidence. I believe that as K-pop became more prominent, undiscovered idol groups faded into obscurity. |
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