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제목 | The job I want to be | 등록일 | 2023-10-11 |
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내용 | before i got married i was really into yoga some time. i thought it would be a nice to be a yoga instructor because i could make the mony and stay in good shape. so i looked into becoming of a yoga instructor but the time and costs for it were too much more than i thought. at that time i had t o make money so i just kept it only in my dream. maybe i was scared about challenging. one thing leads to another. i've just kept doing this job so far and i think i've came here too much far to be a yoga instructor. | ||
담당강사 | 필리핀 강사선택 | 등록일 | 2023-10-20 |
첨삭 내용 | Before I got married I was really into yoga for some time. I thought it would be nice to be a yoga instructor because I could make money and stay in good shape. I looked into becoming a yoga instructor, but the time and cost for it were much more than I thought. At that time, I had to make money, so I just kept it only in my dream. Maybe I was scared of challenges. One thing leads to another. I 've just kept doing this job so far and I think I've come here too far to be a yoga instructor. |