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제목 | I made some sentences with new words. | 등록일 | 2023-11-10 |
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내용 | The quarrel led to lawsuit. It is the obvious fact that he stayed home all night. No one can respond her temper. The retriever is one of the generous species. If you bother him, you have to handle the consequence. Your that action frighten these cute puppies. This thrapist is very competent. I just heard, he broke up fiance. I met him at the staff dinner last month at first. He was flabbergasted and lost for word. I have been seeing her, she is a consistent person. Apparently, he made a big mistake. I can just feel she is extremely upset. I caught a pickpocket yesterday. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-11-13 |
첨삭 내용 | The quarrel led to lawsuit. --> The quarrel led to a lawsuit.
--> The fact that he spent the entire night at home is evident.
--> No one can handle her temper.
--> The retriever is one of the most generous dog species.
--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^
--> Your actions scare these adorable puppies.
--> Correct sentence~ (*Be careful with the spelling of "therapist")
--> I just heard that he broke up with his fiance.
--> I initially got to know him at the staff dinner last month.
--> He was flabbergasted and at a loss for words.
--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^
--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^
--> correct sentence~ ^^
--> correct sentence~ ^^ |