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| 제목 | I have something to add about previous class. | 등록일 | 2023-11-11 |
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| 내용 | When we were talking about taste in man previous class, the man of the boygroup 'Winner' that I told you is an exception. I answered that I like strong, rough, and tough guy, but he is not that person. It's the fact that I like strong person, but I fall in love pretty and angelic person among idols somehow. My ideal type is a person such as Chris Hemsworth, Hugh Jackman, or Tom Hardy. I like these muscular men, but I don't know why I started to like Seung-yoon. I heard a song when I was seventeen years old, and when I woke up I was liking him. I believe that it is a destiny starting like him. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-11-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello!~ Thank you so much for sharing!~ ^^ Seung-yoon is indeed handsome.~~~ ^^
**Correction: When we were discussing taste in men in the last session, I mentioned that the man from the boyband 'Winner' is an exception. I replied that I appreciate powerful, gruff, and rugged guys, but he is not one of them. I appreciate powerful people, but among idols, I find myself drawn to attractive and angelic faces. My dream type would be someone like Chris Hemsworth, Hugh Jackman, or Tom Hardy. I like these strong males, but I'm not sure why I started liking Seung-yoon. When I was seventeen, I heard a song and when I woke up, I liked him. I believe it is a destiny that began with him. |
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