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| 제목 | unforgettable trip to tokyo | 등록일 | 2023-11-15 |
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| 내용 | let me introduce my tokyo trip I will never get this trip first day, i arrived at Narita airport in th evening. i went to shinjuku in a hurry and then met a members we headed to a bar near kabuki-cho and then went to goldenguy to drink whisky drunk as we were, we headed for our accommodation The second day , as soon as i woke up, i ate japanese ramen for hangover then we set off for omotesando. after passing through the pretty and cute market, we went to yokohama, a port city the yokohama had a beatiful night view. then, we went to chinatown to ate dumpling (to be continue...) |
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| 담당강사 | Charisse | 등록일 | 2023-11-16 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Let me tell you my unforgettable Tokyo trip. The first day, I arrived at Narita airport in the evening. I hurried to Shinjuku and met my friends. We headed to a bar near Kabukicho and went to Golden Gai to drink whisky. Drunk as we were, we headed to our accommodation. |
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