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제목 | I made sentences with new words. | 등록일 | 2023-11-18 |
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내용 | If you live like that constantly, youo will get chronic disease. It is her chronic gatigue that make her sleepy. I think you should talk with your parents earnestly. It's hard losing weight through only exercise. He has been losing weight since last year. She agreed as word, but she didn't sign on the document. Stop using this medicine if you break out a rash. Food poisoning cause stomacheache. Apparentely you still hurt, the doctor's diagnosis was fault. Go to see a doctor and dont worsen your disease. Everyone having scallop had food poisoning. If the dish looks undercooked, don't have it. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-11-24 |
첨삭 내용 | If you live like that constantly, youo will get chronic disease. --> If you live constantly like that, you will get chronic disease.
--> Her persistent fatigue causes her to sleep.
--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^
--> It is difficult to lose weight alone through exercising.
--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^
--> She agreed verbally, however, she didn't sign on the document.
--> If you develop a rash while taking this medication, discontinue use.
--> Food poisoning can cause stomachache.
--> You must still be in pain, as the doctor's diagnosis was incorrect.
--> Visit a doctor to avoid worsening your condition.
--> Everyone who ate scallops got food poisoning.
--> If the food appears to be undercooked, avoid it. |