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| 제목 | I'm talking about a band that I like latest. | 등록일 | 2023-11-18 |
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| 내용 | I like idols, rappers, singers, and band. One of them, I've been into a band these days. The name is 'maneskin'. I heard the song 'GOSSIP' of their in some playlist, and it's really addictive. Then I have started listening their all songs and I finally found my favorite song. The name is 'TIMEZONE' and it's little different others rock song. This song is softer than other rock and the lyrics is sensitive. I was told that this song was written that base on missing friends that felt for tour by vocalist. The meaning is special, so I more like it. I look forward to listening this song directly. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-11-24 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello!~ Oh~ that's interesting.~ ^^ I'll try to find that song in Youtube and listen if I do have some spare time.~ Thanks for sharing!~ ^^ Have a wonderful weekend, Jini!~ ^^ Take care!~ ^^ --Lynda^^
**Correction: I am a fan of idols, rappers, singers, and bands. One of them, I've recently become interested in a band. 'Maneskin' is the name. I heard their song 'GOSSIP' on a playlist and it's incredibly addictive. Then I continued listening to all of their songs till I picked my favorite. 'TIMEZONE' is the name of the song, and it's a little different from other rock songs. This song is quieter than other rock songs, with compassionate lyrics. I was told that the vocalist wrote this song about missing friends while on tour. Because the connotation is unique, I prefer it. I'm excited to hear this song in its entirety. |
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