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| 제목 | I'm taking about the movie 'Spring of Seoul' a little. | 등록일 | 2023-12-09 |
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| 내용 | I told about 'Spring of Seoul' in last class, and this time I'm talking about it more. Actually, I have hesitated since I wached the movie 'May 18', in Korea called it 'Glamorous vacation'. Because I was very impacted after I saw civilians were killed by soldiers in the movie 'May 18'. 'Spring of Seoul' is the story just before 'May 18'. But eventually, I thought it was a good choice watching this movie. I learned about this incident by only textbook, this is the meaningful time for me. I was upset throughout watching, but I could remind the strong people to protect government and nation. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-12-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello~ I have been hearing good reviews about the film "Spring of Seoul". Truly, Koreans are patriotic and genuinely care and acknowledge the heroism of your forefathers.~ ^^
**Correction: I mentioned 'Spring of Seoul' in the previous class, and I'm going to talk more about it this time. Actually, I've been hesitating since I saw the film 'May 18', also known as 'Glamorous Vacation' in Korea. Because I was deeply moved after seeing civilians slaughtered by soldiers in the film 'May 18'. 'Spring of Seoul' is the story preceding 'May 18'. But, in the end, I think it was a smart decision to watch this film. This is a significant occasion for me because I just learned about it from a textbook. I was upset while watching, but I could remember the strong people to safeguard the government and the country. |
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